Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, November 5, 2019
8 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Lucy,
ReplyDeleteIt is Zoe W from Marshland School.
I really liked your blog post about litter because...
I like how you made a word find for the littering because it was quite fun and hard so I can tell you put a lot of effort into it!
Next time you could put a description below.
I like how you did that turtle by your self
Good Job!
From Zoe W
p.s. That was a great post for your first go!
Thank you Zoë
ReplyDeleteIt's ok Lucy
ReplyDeleteHi Lucy, I really liked your turtle and I also enjoyed the wordfind about pollution. I also liked that you gave the 2 left pictures on slide 4 a background! Maybe next time you could add a description but apart from that it was great.
ReplyDeletehi lucy like your your silde look like you put a lot of work into this pice of work next time you make the picture bigger
ReplyDeleteHi lucy my name is Tyler good work maybe do bigger pictures next time bye
ReplyDeleteHi Lucy,
ReplyDeleteIt is great your doing your slide on pollution, but why pollution? and where does it come from?
hi Lucy,
ReplyDeletemy name is Lucy.p i like your post i love the turtle