Wednesday, March 25, 2020
Weekday writing
Hi, it's Lucy, I have made a slide on google slides for all my weekday writing that I do on weekday's my first piece of amazing writing is about the biggest wave in the world. I think at the end of 4 weeks I will come back to school as a better writer do you think you will come back to school as a better writer???
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Hi Lucy, I love that you have set yourself the goal to work on your writing over this time at home. I liked your piece of writing on the wave. I could imagine it would be quite scary to have a big wave come rolling in!
ReplyDeleteLucy I like your writing especially the big wave story! I think you become a great writer. Keep up the good work :)
ReplyDeleteKia ora Lucy
ReplyDeleteI'm impressed with how hard you have worked on your writing. I think you will definitely return to school as a more accomplished writer. Your big wave story had so many expressive words. Remember to proof read for punctuation, ka pai!