Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, August 21, 2020
The three little pigs fractured fairytale
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Hi Lucy
ReplyDeleteI would love to see the finished work here. Well down so far.It would be cool to see speech marks showing what the pigs were thinking getting back on the wolf! My favourite part of Book Week was definately Dress up day. Ka pai!
Ms Catton
Hi Lucy
ReplyDeleteI liked how you changed the pig and the wolf but maybe next time you could try to finish your work, but it look's really good so far.
I liked how you changed the pig and the wolf but maybe next time you could try to finish your work, but it look's really good so far.
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